Poem "A charmed life"

A charmed life

When you wake up

And the dew is in the leaves of a tree,

You’re in harmony with your soul.

While you listen to the singer birds,

Your eyes are crying

And half a smile appears.

Few metres from you,

a daisy is flowering.

You had never felt to be in peace.

At the moment,

your blood is going quickly.

TIME to feel good.

This is my first poem in English, I'm sure I have some mistakes. Occasionally, I write poems in English because I think is very important to practice the language and learn a lot of vocabulary.

So, what is the best way to do that writing? It's AMAZING :)